Sumi H. Inkblot

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this poem, to be honest. XD It's an interesting idea, but the angle is a little bit weird. I think that the ...

Well! Lol. My first major impression is that of the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" with Will Ferrell -- the style of narration is very similar. Narration It's quite amusing, actually, ...

Ooh, Twitty. I'm enjoying this. In advance: Chuck a PM my way when/if you post the next chapter. ^_^ Shadow Tattybogle was quite certain of two things. Firstly, Mistress had ...

Hey Galerius! Are you really ten? Ten-year-olds don't write like this. XD Is the "due" in stanza I, line iii supposed to be "dew" (the stuff you find on leaves ...

My first complaint about this poem is that it's a lot like your "Center" poem, with the same type of repeating meter (2/3/2/3) and rhyme scheme (a/b/c/b). It just gets ...

Hey, Angel! I like what you've got going here, and your rhyming's generally not bad. Slant rhyme is good. Your biggie issue is meter. For example, in the third stanza, ...

Hey Aubree! My immediate problem with this story is the awful snootyness of the narrator. xD She's such a snot! Does she have a reason for this, or is it ...

Haha, I love the Light clothing diss. It's so true , I had the exact same thoughts when reading the manga. xD Total amusement aside, you really must rate this ...

Whoa.... o_O Hey, Bobcat. I'd love to review this, but one, there's way too much for me to cover in one critique, and two, I'm not going to be able ...

Hey Shoo! I kind of like what you've got going here (I haven't read much by Pratchett but this seems like him, is he an influence?) but there is some ...

Hey, Calling! I like what you've got right now, but here are a few things I'd like to point out: i. Read this . It's so truthful it's hilarious. Leave ...

Hey Glow! You've got a good start here, but the poem needs some work. Here are the two most obvious problems: 1. Shake up the camera a little bit. Show ...

Hey, Searria! I'm not quite sure what to tell you about this, because you say you want to make it into a picture book for children. Because if you're doing ...

Eeeeeee! Time Paradox is awesome. xD [spoiler] I made uber sure not to read anything about it until I actually read the book and... I love how it made me ...

Here we go again! :) I'll try to be less annoying this time. Long ago, in the ancient past, the land of Ragonia was been ruled by terrifying, fire-breathing creatures ...